Evaluation Q3

What have you learnt from your audience feedback?

Most of the audience feedback was positive and these are some of the comments that were given to us....

Music Video

Rebecca Smith - It was good. I liked the clip of Alison, she looked very professional and the programme is edited well, the newspaper clip was very effective.

Rakhee Patel - I felt that it was something which was very similar to a real news report. Having interviews and viewer footage adds to the realism of the video. There was clear consistency which adds to the professionalism.

Runi Ali - I thought it followed the conventions of an actual news report. The report by Alison seemed really professional and the framing was consistant throughout.

Hannah Sealy - The tones of the images went really well with the genre of report. The background music was too loud at one point as you can't hear te news presenter talking.

Chelsey Martin - The close ups of Alison in certain places was really effective and I liked the reverse effect that you used with the traffic. The only criticism that I would give is that there are jumps in some places and this does not make it look proffesional enough.

After taking into consideration Hannah's views on the problem of sound I altered the sound level of the theme tune as Runi begins to talk and I think that It sounds more effective. It also sounds alot clearer now and I think that this change has made the clip seem even more professional than it was before.

Taking on board Chelsey's thoughts I went back to the beginning of the footage and slowly went through each individual clip and moved them closer together to get rid of any jumps or gaps. This meant that all the audio and film clips that I had un-linked had to be moved seperately which was very time consuming. After doing this, I think that the video improved dramatically and it ran a lot smoother than it had done before.

Website

Lousie Barwell - I think that the pictures that you used stand out very well and are really eye catching, one thing I would say is that there are too many different colours used in the writing and I think this needs to be cut down a bit.

We decided to cut the colours down to just three and I think that by doing this we have improved the effectiveness of the website dramatically



Lauren bailey - I like the 'top video' section of your homepage and I really like the graffiti picture you have used. Well done girls!